200 Word Challenge – Descriptive Language
Look at the picture below carefully and complete the table.
Check on the next page for Step 2.
Who is in the photo?
A climber and a cameraman
What is happening in the photo?
The climber is hiking and the cameraman is taking photos.
Where was the photo taken?
At the mountains
What makes this exciting?
It’s a challenge
How do you think the characters feel?
Climber: he feels confident.
Photographer: he is excited.
Write a 200 Word recount as either the CLIMBER or the PHOTOGRAPHER.
Remember; your challenge is to use DESCRIPTIVE Language to SHOW, not TELL your audience what is happening.
Begin your writing here: in this photo you see a man climbing. That’s me ok let’s go back to the start. Last week i was bored and i did not know that there was a big mountain near me and i had forgotten the last time i went rock climbing ahhh memories. But wait I was like “I’m free I bet I can go. Yes I can go” Yay!!! Can’t wait. After that I packed my things and was about to go but I forgot one thing: it was my anchor. After i got that i left when i went to the mountain the mountain was around six KILOMETRES!! Can you believe that? Well, I was not right when I was about to climb. This cameraman came up to me and said, “Are you gonna climb that he said because I can take a video. ?” yes Well even though I was scared I still climbed not only for the viewers but the fun and just like that I climbed and climbed and after seven hours I had finally finished the climb. After that I felt so puffed I felt like my vocals were gonna burst. After all of that, me and the cameraman parted ways the end…
200 Word Challenge
The 200 Word Challenge is an opportunity to practice writing using just the right words. 200 Words might sound like a lot, but once you get going you’ll find yourself crossing that line easily, so be careful to only say what you NEED to.
(This whole thing is over 100 words already)
For Week One your challenge is to write a 200 word recount of a time you…
Tasted the best food you’ve ever tasted.
|Remember! This week we have been learning about chronological order. Make sure you get the sequence of events in the right order.|
|Begin your writing here: yesterday I went to head out to a restaurant that had five stars!! Could you believe that?. When I was pulling up to the driveway the restaurant looked like a zero star restaurant. But when I compared the bad looking shop to the photo on google they kind of looked familiar. Who am I kidding, when I went in I met the store clerk He looked like a quack but When you add food to the equation he was no dummy. I looked at the menu and it was all octopus stew. Well, I wasn’t surprised, maybe it was the only food he can cook. When i was served the dish it looked disgusting it looked so yuck maybe dogs wouldn’t like to eat it. But I still ate it because I did not want to disappoint the old man so I ate it but to my surprise it was delicious. The meat of the octopus just melted in my mouth. And I was like “he knew I would react like this” after i went home i never forgot that beautiful taste sensation.|
Today is the first day of the term!-Monday 9th october. At the first day we all gathered around at the hall to do a assembly to witness a new term. At the assembly teachers from diffrent teams did performances to show us what we were doing for this and all of them were all about immersion activitys like designing our own work of art. The most intresting performance i saw was team one. It was team one because they were really thinking about they going to do and why.At the end we all l